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i need help with my story...?
Ok, this is what my story is about...
There is this boy, Fazim and he is live in a happy village etc. but one day he and his brother are out hunting and on their way back, they notice a huge cloud of smoke coming from the direction of their village. Fazim's brother tells Fazim to run away, because these evil guys have attacked the village. Fazim reluctantly does, and he is unsure if his brother is still alive. Later, he meets Alriha and Raye, and they journey to stop the evil guys that are controlling their country. then they learn of a key which leads to a realm in which there is a sacred guarded treasure. that is what the evil guy wants and the key is in fragment scattered across the country.
i don't know what to do next, or how to start my story! HELP!!!!
Start with some character studies and an outline. You really need to do some thinking as to what this other realm is about and how their society is run. Every society has some kind of a structure - government etc. What is this other realm like? How do they get there? But it all starts with the outline and the character studies. You need to know who the characters are - flesh them out so you will be able to know how they act in situations. Too often fantasy writers just jump into stories because they don't think they have background work and research to do. They most definitely have a lot of it to do. Pax - C
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